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Thursday, August 26, 2021

Speach Breach

 For this wk for writting we were tasked with making a speach then we got a comment then you had to blog said comment but if your comment was somthig was like looks good. Then you just take two screenshots my comment was looks good then I went to my parents and they told me to just fix some pernouseashion so heres my two screenshots.




If you were going to comment on my speech what would you say?




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