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Wednesday, October 30, 2019

GOING BACK IN TIME AT ferrymead park

WE WENT TO FEERYMEAD PARK ON THE 29TH SO YA THEN WE DID SOME exploring AND WE WATCHED A MOVIE AND THEN WE PLAYED ON GOKARTS AND IN THE AFTER NOON WE WENT ON A TRAM WE WERE ALSOW WAS THIS giant wagin and we  DID A ROWL PLAY
 SO YA WE WENT TO THIS HOWL THING AND THERE WAS A JAIL AND A OLD HOUSE THEN WE WENT TO LUNCH

Have YOU EVER WENT TO FERRYMEAD PARK

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 21, 2019 at 11:38 AM

    Cairo I think you could have wrote more and check that it makes more sense and also have you checked the spelling and full stops and I think you went throu the story to quick.
    from Harry

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  2. AnonymousDecember 5, 2019 at 11:23 AM

    Hi Cairo I think you could write more and make more sense wen writing.And describe ferry mead park better.

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